Comments : Coping with love

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. But I think that it should be split up into stanzas. It would help the flow which seemed to be a little off to me. Other then that it was good.

    gave it a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Beautiful poem<3
    You know i relate to this girl.

    I am in love with thee idea of love
    which makes me crave it all more,
    Without love I'd perish
    like a dying flower.

    I love this part :)
    You can picture the flower withering away in your mind
    Great Job<3
    5/5(:

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Very nice poem, good job like always

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Yeah he will find u ,,dont worry..and for now ,,5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Yup this thought sometimes do screw up that you have no one to see you around, to take care of you.....however others have love in their lives

    :) nicely expressed :) liked it