Comments : Hostage of Your Look

  • Hello,
    so very glad to hear you are back :)...an excellent job as always....

  • 9 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    Amazing poem so true

  • 9 years ago

    by yogi73

    I think you did a really good job capturing the sense of frustration and sadness with this poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by mandy

    Very well written! I enjoyed the form of the poem. It was sad, sweet and had rhythm. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 8 years ago

    by yogi73

    It's a dfficult situation to be infatuated with someone that doesn't care. I like your clever wording and effectiveness of the poem.