Comments : I just want to tell you...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I just want to tell you,
    I love you with all my heart.
    I wish for us to be together,
    Never shall we be apa
    -I think apa meant to be apart.

    & i think the ending should be
    Love,
    Me
    or something like that. But other then that i loved it :).
    How much you love him shines through, & how he means everything to you. It flowed so well, it was so sincere & emotion is so obvious.

    Good Job(:
    5/5