Comments : My Literal Cliche

  • 12 years ago

    by Sigoney Holder

    I love this !

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I have to admit, that even though this might be filled with cliche expression you made this really original in your own kind of way. I do not think that this belongs into the Fun & Humor section because it still seems like a love poem to me after all.

    I thought that the title is really eye-catching, that's what actually brought me here and I think it fits to the poem. I like your choice of words and how you worded this poem. It almost flows compltely smoothly. The message is definitely strong and I think you did a good job writing this.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    You brought a big smile with your cliche's and who said they can't work . lOL Amazing and original very witty Loved it

    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Very clever and a write worth reading. I really get tired of critics saying something is cliche. I mean we can go to the extreme but a line in a poem is no biggie.
    I applaud you in this write Great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    The scorn of a thousand dead roses
    I heap thee about! I feel like I don't
    care about you anymore. You are a pitiful
    bug. But I love you more deeply than ever!
    ~ this is my most favorite part but great poem I looovveed it :) :) I love the wording with the rose
    U worded ur poem very well and it flowed fantastically :) 10 stars 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This is so nice:) its shows ur smartness:) a 5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Omg, this was so funny, Zach:)

    Somehow it makes life lighter, when you are able to laugh about the pain.

    "Or anything with a rose petal" ha ha ha ha! Oh, I love this poem!

    A very well done from me,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    "Or anything with a rose petal" hehe, I have to agree with all that is said above. :)
    Well written!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    "Words
    cannot explain my sadness, except
    what I write in this poem."

    I enjoyed this line :)

    Wonderful write! 5/5

    mandy

  • 2 years ago

    by Rio

    The scorn of a thousand dead roses

    one of the most touching lines I've read its raveled in deep meaning but still explains the feeling.