Your words translate to deep emotions. Nice poem, great flow, powerful image of loss

Wow,,,,amazing and sad and good and wow,,,it was so hard to choose a favorite stanza cuz the entire poem is just so fanfastic and amazing,,,but this is some lines i tried to like the most,,,
Sleepless nights, restless days
Hardly breathing, barely alive

i love love loved it 10/10

You wrote this excellently. I loved this, I feel the same way at times.
5/5

Wow....i Love this... the words drew me in like i was hypnotized..

"Craft this coffin, take this hammer to drive the nails in
It all begins in the mind but, in the heart is where it all ends."
...I Love those lines, and this one too:
"Ball and chain, wrapped around my heart
Death's been at my heels, from the very start"
...I love this one and i give it a 5/5
Keep it up, your really good!

ALSO....it is added to my Favorites List ^_^

I really like this poem it speaks, it tells how they feel, you have an amazing tallent keep writing