Comments : The Weakened Spirit

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Love this poem :).
    Amazinggg(:

    My favs are

    You still taunt me
    and every icicle I have in my body
    You make colder.

    I become a careless soul
    for the things you've done
    for the pain and hurt I've felt.
    &
    I try to forget you
    but you're still there
    and in my heart I cry.

    Where do I even begin
    because I thought I said goodbye
    but somehow I find myself
    thinking of you.

    All wonderful tho :)
    Emotion pours through, the pain hes caused & even though he put you through hell you still overcame it & dont treat others differently bcuz of him
    <3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This poem rocked in a few ways, the pain and hurt in the beginning, the mistrust and betrayal. Yet you ended it with determination of overcoming. BRAVO