Comments : These lonely tears...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Spectacular :)

    Such strong emotion wanting her to call you wanting you back so badly & finally after she does, you've already moved on.

    Such deep emotion was felt, and you could see everything playing out.
    I love your poems :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii siiiiiiiiiiiiiimply loved it........... <3
    just so outstanding.........i can relate to it so well, & moreover the way it reached the climax....i totally loved it....<3 1000/1000

  • 12 years ago

    by laura

    I really liked your poem, it hurts