"Broken one to many times,
by the " love of her life ",
she doesn't know how to open up again,
can't stand to hear those two words
"It's Over"
by somebody she falls for next."

I love that stanza. Okay, two things in this stanza to go off of our chat about grammar.. Haha because I am a grammar nazi... Thank you online college, anyway! xD

In the first sentence it should be too; in the next sentence your comma should inside of your quotation marks. That's my only picking at it. It's amazing and perfect other than grammar errors. Yeah, I know grammar is lame. xD

5/5, hun.