Comments : Opening Kiss

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this :).

    It flowed perfectly and the love pours out. You can picture yourself entering the house slowly & carefully and a smile appearing.
    Amazing job :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    :) this is cute 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Amazing scenery in the 1st stanza. It kind of reminded me of one of The Script new songs: If you ever come back

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow fantastic and vivid greatly done :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    So vivid for short poem, very sweet. 5/5