Wow, deep!

Nothing in this room but shadows
As they begin to surround my bed
"We want you, just end it tonight,
Why live, you should be dead"
-You can picture hearing this laying down in bed at night.

The pain thats going out shines through, it flows so well. I love it(:
5/5

Wow this is amazing. i could see everything that was happening.. truly amazing

Rhyme and flow was a sure winner. The emotions penned are extreme giving the poem punch and character of it's own. An excellent poem of emotion and loss.

Connie