This is really heart wrenching, you penned strong emotion of loss. Good luck to you and your poem was a cry for reconciliation

Connie

Lots of emotion here Salina (?) but I would start with capital I's and theres way too many of them-try to eliminate some and breaking the poem up some where so the reader has a little more time to let the thoughts sink in. Enjoyed reading you. Take care
Redhotmess