I could visualize this in my head :)

The imagery was perfect. You can see her underneath the tree, her pondering in her head where is my ride. Why aren't they here yet? Going numb, slowly freezing trying to remain happy but losing faith in it

It flowed perfectly(:. It made you wanna keep read

5/5(:

You have a great imagination that flows from your hand to your pen. The imagery was calming though the poem sad in content..