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  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Aw :)

    Yes he will. Your soulmate aka Prince Charming will come when you least expect it sweeping you off your feet :).

    I love this poem. Emotion is beautiful :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Speechles, jus so touching, so romantic, ful of love,love and only love. lucky wil be ur prince charming..i think he shud wait for u..js 5 to gv u..nominated..too

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I have names
    and only one
    has truly seen me
    but which knows me
    better through my personality
    the real me,
    the me you can't see
    can't see in pictures
    can't see on the outside
    but what's inside

    wow I really enjoyed readin this just amazing :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Amazing piece. It has a ton of emotion and a great story/meaning. There is a terrificly simple word choice, but it fits this piece and adds a wonderful flow. Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This soooo lovely:) wish u the best:) a 5 from me too=)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I don't read as much of your work as I would like or that I should. You've penned emotions that flow and spin. A Very enjoyable piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    A lovely read.
    " he will find me
    want me
    even when i push him free"
    Brings a multitude of images to mind.
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Freya

    Although I close myself like a night

    You open, when you open
    with the light of world

    so clear and beautiful

    no one in this world has that hand