First of all I love the title for its uniqueness and because of how creative it is; I have never seen anything similar and it fits to the poem really well. The title is the reason I'm here anyway because it had me really interested.
I didn't lose any of that interest while reading your poem; I was rather positively surprised because I didn't expect to find this. The idea behind this is quite original and your choice of words underline the context well. Your poem flows really fluently and I was able to follow the thoughts you devoloped. If I was to pick a favorite stanza I would actually fail since I enjoyed it all.