Hes not the one,
hes tearing you apart,
making you lose that fiery glow,
the fight in you is fading away,
letting him control you,
look at what you're doing to yourself.

i love that stanza.
it shows how much you care about her safety and her happiness.
overall it was an awesome read!
love the emotions!
1000/10000! :)

This is an amazing Poem, love it hun :) ! 5/5 x

The message of this poem is amazing, I have so many friends who cant seem to open their eyes and one of them already gpt seriously hurt, literally and I wish they could read this, amazing :)

Really Sweat and beautiful Poem, I learn alot just by reading your amazing poems and quotes...5/5 of course..

Wow girl this is great and amazing and and emotion powerful and strong for ur friend who I hope opens her eyes and wow I loved it 10/10 :)

I really like your poem, as you speak of how the relationship is poisoned and she really need to get out of it.

This is amazing just like everything you write hahaha :)

This sounds so much like my ex it isnt even funny.. i love it and can relate fully too it.. 5/5

That sound just like my ex... Great poem! 5/5