Comments : Transparent Pain

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Such sadness is felt in this poem. She feels so alone, doesn't know what to do with herself. Slowly disappearing, becoming invisible.

    This flows perfectly<3
    Love it
    Amazing Poem
    :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    I am speechless at the feelings I have reading your poem, words just dont come right now to really say how much it affected me but I loved it even with all the sadness inside it