Wow...speechless I am for this poem too great too amazing too wonderful to have any words to explain it's divine specialty,,, I absolutely loved it and loved reading it with greatness beyond compare :) :) <3***<3 :) words can't explain how great this poems and has strong feeling and truth,,,outstanding :) :) 100/100

I really liked the title because though it might be simple it gave me, as the reader, a little idea what this poem might lead to and I was curious to find out whether I was right with my assumption. Though it may not seem like it, this poem flowed quite well and I like the way your poem developed, how you started at the clock and then described a situation more in detail and came back to the clock. The message is definately powerful and it was a pleasureable read.