Comments : Dormant

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    You already know what i think of this & that i love it<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I quite enjoyed this poem.

    I don't know how others see this but this is what I felt about the poem...

    I felt as though it is about an unrequited love.

    Dormant,
    in his silent footsteps,
    for which they kiss,
    I loomed,
    a fire burning soul,
    as my temper grew,
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

    Did you catch the man you love kissing and being with another? You felt angry and betrayed.

    i called upon the morning dew,
    love did not bloom
    but rusted with confusion.
    Dormant,
    i knew
    and he did not see,
    but in death he now sleeps.
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    He didn't notice you were watching and now your love for him has died.

    A lovely poem. Emotional well written.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow that's exactly what I did :D thanxs for ur amazing comment xx