Comments : Who Says?

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow, I love the questions... it got me thinking about my life and I guess helped me realized the important things that I do believe in! Good work my friend! So simple yet so much power behind the questions!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Who says?
    Faith
    is a broken word
    liked it....

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like this piece. It is creative and simple. I especially like the end, because a lot of people would fight that, would say that the majority of the world says that, but in truth no one of importance does. The flow is extraordinary. Correction to my first statement, I LOVE this piece. Amazing job

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The title was simple and effective, though I question if it was too obvious, too simple?

    A very true and poignant piece.
    I'd suggest if I may that...
    You re-arrange the lines
    so it reads

    "Who says
    dreams
    will run dry?"
    etc etc

    A great piece overall

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Yet again you have a good here :D

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    This poem is excellent! i haven't read a poem like this in along time, you have a way with words! 5/5 ^.^