Wow, This Brought Me So Many Questions, And I Just Keep On Guessing. Wonderfully Written.. So Short Yet So Full Of Life And Fealings. This Was A Peice That Really Showed Your Talent As A Writer..Nice Job.:) 5/5
-Jessi

I agree you kept me guessing for the majority of the piece, but it was a nice read. A write that I believe should be given a 5/5 for its originality and use of intrigue. You are a magnificent author and I hope to see more of you soon.

Again, I agree with the words of Adreamer.
Beautifully written. I like how you ended it with a question, leaving the reader wondering. :) You are an excellent writer, keep it up. :)