Aww a simple poem tinged with a drop of sadness

A lovely write

5/5

While I loved the repition of the title, I think in this it was overdone, and maybe limiting it to two lines between repeat would work better as the flow was a little off.

But a great piece overall
love
Tara
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There are many ways to describe this poem and i feel that its a certain type of poem that a majority of its reads will relate to. i truly enjoyed reading this poem 5/5