I love how you can relate to anything i write
my Twin sista
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Awww this was a nice collaboration! I liked the idea of showing the two perspectives - the female and the male, and how there were differences but also similarities. I like the way you both played with words, such as faith, destiny, hope etc. Good collaboration all in all :)
It was nice seeing your two styles together, since you both have different kind of poetry, but it worked out very well. Nicely done!

Just one suggestion -
"Since I have you him with me now" --> is this supposed to be "Since I have him with me now" or you? I think it's a typo..

Great job guys =D

Now I call on you Love
Do you even exist to be lost ?..

This is my most fav line..anothr colab,beautifuly and brilliantly written from d depth..
5 ,5,5..fr u guys..lvd ur wrk.

You two always click :)

Excellant - a dual monologue! Love the parallel thought process. Destiny, time, hope, faith, love, and the greatest of these . . . .
I observe his side is unbelieving, fearful even, of losing what he would most want, while hers is confident, but sensitive to his concerns. Very well played out in each role.

Minor stuff: typo at the begining of hers - "planed" should be "planned."
I think "found" works better for his final thought than "lost"
Think a more positive word should be used than "wicked"

Even as it is, it deserves a WIN.

...Hope... (..wait in tym) luvly wright both.... keep it up