Comments : Hello Dear

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I really love the words and rhymes of this poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A well penned poem and one that grabs the reader with full emotional value.
    I would edit the strange characters out of this. A small distraction from a good write.

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow... The format was different than a lot of poems but somehow fitting for the essence of this poem. Definitely hit a darker side of sadness.

    5/5
    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Well written,maintained the flow throughout and the rhyme is also good.Addressed simple,but to the point.
    Appreciated !

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I loved how each line grabbed my attention and made me want to read on. You have a really good poem here and I feel you have talent. I look forward to reading more of your work.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Oh ...Iliked that ...nice poem
    keep up ...5/5 :)