Great! I liked the way you incorporated nature.

I'm debating whether it should be me or myself in this sentence..

So they may cleanse this tired vessel I call me.

I'm recommending you for good read in a new thread some of us has started in discussion. You have talent and I think you should be read..

I liked this small gem :) Only suggestion I have is maybe a stronger title than "wind"
hows about something more like "cleansing breeze or cleansing wind" you get my idea. Sometimes a spicer title can get more reads.
Very nice!

Vivid images, gentle winds of enjoyment :-)
Very good piece