Comments : Ocean of Passion

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww this poem was very sweet... I like the title "ocean of passion" and the way you expressed this poem. It was interesting.. Well done :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Kips

    Thanks Alissa for the comment!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Getting to know how reluctant 'her' emotions are to show-up, really points it clear, d@ yr case study about this, is OBVIOUSLY indisputable! Great work gem, tnx 4 shar'n. Much Enjoy'd this 1. Keep bring'n in d right dogs bro! Hi 5! @ least.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kips

    Thanks for your comment! Although it gets confusing at some point, but it's cool to know that you like it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Phantasma

    Lovely poem, lovely diction. However, there is one small thing I would change. Instead of saying "I felt your body vibration" I feel it would be best said as "I felt your bodies vibration". Over all though I found this to be a wonderful poem. Keep up the admirable writing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kips

    Thanks