Wow I keep reading this poem over and over kinda like a puzzle hard to solve,,,I did enjoy reading it I guess I would call it interesting but wonderful,,,I loved it 5/5 :)

As I read the feeling of hopelessness or desperation rang loudly in my ears. Wanting a better life then what has been dished out.
Had a nice flow, though the lines being so short was a little distracting for me..:-) hey I confuse easy what can I say lol
Overall excellent

Connie