I love it my friend! So much emotion and a deep, long desire for another! Good work yet again!

This is full of love, well written5/5:)

Love this

how much you love him pours out, love taking total control over your body. Knowing you'd never be able to live with out him.
The emotion is beautiful & everybody wants this kinda love<3
5/5

This is something else, whoever gives us this emotion within us is very lucky

another top 1000/1000 for me :0)

Ya,guys u r right..this is some realy deep work on love..loved it mermaid..5 hearts..

You're words are sensual yet classy, tender and beautiful. A well written poem of desires..Excellent

Wow, i read it agn,and come to d conclusion dat u cant write like dis..
Its nt right..
By this way, u r making me in love wid u..
So, so, so romantic..
I wish i cud rate it agn and agn..