Comments : Dwelling Inside

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Don't fear your feelings, be one with the heart, be one with the moment.
    Another poem of desperation, fear of the unexpected, run with it, embrace the feeling for not many come our way.

    I love the honesty and the emotions in your poems. They are so real that the reader can also feel what you intended to convey.

    In your first line, I and Just happened doesn't work :-)