Oh gosh I loved it :-) what a wonderful form and you did it so well .

Connie

Nicely done, you always have so many different forms I think that is your talents, showing us up lol.
The wording was excellent, and the form interesting might give it a try

Dark. Nice form. I wonder must there be 2 lines alike, or did you just do it that way? Maybe I will try one too. Geat chioce for the title. What imagery!

Connie, I just decided that repeating the lines seemed to fit, it is not a requirement of that form.

Ohh what a dark yet beautiful write... I interpreted in two different ways, one with the literal meaning, other as a metaphor for all the devilish thoughts that reside in our head...
loved the way you have expressed it.

If it haunts you, stop watching so much horror and gore. If it doesn't and you get a thrill then it's alright. I guess. :-)

This is a sick poem here very twisted i love it