Wow,,i loooved it :) fantastic job just amazing how u capture everything in my eyes and i can picture everything and i read down the lines to be very vivid :) i loved it amazing :) 5/5

But why must you fade?.

How awesome is this line?. .So simple yet we never stumble upon such lines.

Take my heart.
Take all of me.
I'm yours.

Again so simple but so romantic.

This entire piece is beautifully penned. Very vivid. Marvelous job.

Beautiful 5/5