Wish ur love last forever:) I love this poem. Great work. 5/5

I'd dive in the deepest ocean just to with you
^Missed out the word 'be' at the end of the line

I loved the rhymes which flowed well and were not at all forced it seems.
I love the simplicity of this piece, it adds to the day to day wording of love and happiness

An awesome piece for sure

Love
Tara
xxxx

Poems like these is what I missed when you weren't around because I can literally feel the love in your words. The fact that this poem rhymes so naturally and flows smoothly underline the context very well. If it wasn't like that and was rather choppy, it'd be harder to believe your words too. I have to admit that some comparisons weren't that original, but most of the time they were.
Overall you penned a heartfelt and touching poem.

I promise to love you forever and a day
To keep your sky blue and never turn grey
I promise to be there and always be true
I'd dive in the deepest ocean just to be with you

aww this is so amazing, and I loved the rhymes so 5/5

Rhyme and flow was awesome Tony.
Your words were flowers that bloomed into the beauty of emotions
Excellent

The Rhyming scheme is what made me love the poem.
It flowed smoothly.

Amazing poem :)

Love pours out of this poem, the love you feel for her. How you would do anything to be with her. Saying that the pain you feel without her kills you.
I feel this way about guy.
Flawless piece<3
5/5