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I'd say I'm pretty much content with this composition. The flow is epic. The rhyming scheme does not take away from the message, for the structure is intended as such.
As for the message, doubting, resenting deities is normal. But it is pretty understandable that upon asking no answer is received. You try only for so long, till you fail to hear an echo.
by Innocent Fairy
Wow wow wow amazing woderful poem i am very delighted to have read it you did such fantastic work and you worded it very greatly :) I love love loved it just magnificent and very amazing :) 5/5
I immensely adore poems which talk about relation between God and people.. faith and blasphemy.. all these matters related to our existence.
And the way you handled your message is really something interesting.
by Jump from Life
This poem sent chills running up and down my spine! Oh, how many a night I have thought about this! I believe that many people can relate very strongly to this poem, and the way it flowed was miraculous! Truly a stupendous poem! Beautifully penned!