OMG
This was really good, the sadness in such few lines, the title was awesomely captivating, not what I expected but so awesome all the same,
love this one

Love
Tara
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I think you really potray a nice image of solitude. great imagery! well done

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The tell of a poet, in my opinion, is someone who can paint a picture for u with their words. Thats what u did for me.

Simply beautiful, there are no other words to describe it