Comments : Cold

  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I really love this one..... very creative!!! You do have the nature love in you :-) LOVE this poem~

  • 13 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    You have this creative mind in writing nature poems like ur mum:)
    Great poem, I loved it:)

    • 13 years ago

      by Rita hendeson

      She is my birth mother she is not my mom . im sorry if you did not know this but icringe when people call her my mom. she chose her life over mine .

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    The beginning could have been a metaphoric line or two ..
    The wind is whipping through my area today and it's cold so I can relate to each word haha..excellent