Love the wording and ryme. The rythym is good but could use a little work. Seems like there is more you could tell. All in all its a nice peice.

Most ppl have problems with the rhyme theme in poems. You have conquered that to perfection. It's never forced but flows nicely. You have talent my friend, keep writing each poem will be better than the last. The only suggestion I have is add some emotional value instead of just being descriptive. Awesome bro :-)

Amazing :) I loved it,,it was greatly written and wow it was so fantastic and great a really terrific job I loved it :) 5/5

Wow i love this :)
It caught my attention as soon as i started reading. I could visualize the whole thing happening. It flowed perfectly & was flawless.

Amazing Job
5/5

I love zombies! and this poem described them well very amazing! :)))) 5/5

Great rhythm and rhyme here. An excellent topic too. The title really drew me in. Well done.