Nice work.

It's full of imagery and crisp in its delivery.
I think it would benefit from breaking it into metrical lines. For example:

I dream of a valley. It's called, Valley of Peace. My valley is beautiful and peaceful. In my dreams I go to my Valley, it's the only place I find peace.

I dream of a valley.
It's called, Valley of Peace.
My valley is beautiful and peaceful.
In my dreams I go to my Valley,
it's the only place I find peace.

Try it out.

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Thank you! I was thinking of writing it like that, but I summited my poem and I thought it was too late. lol.