Comments : Unfair and Unclear

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    The poem is amazing:)

    Tear after tear
    I am lost here
    life is never fair
    and it all reflects
    in a mirror

    I am weak
    I am not strong
    though I look to God
    I ask for the help needed
    to overcome
    for it just seems to be,
    trial after trial
    test after test
    when can I rest?
    ^^
    These r my fav stanzas. I enjoyed reading it. Great poen. Ofc a 5 from me:)

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Nicely written,5..
    Plz correct two times are in the first stnza

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Aw :(

    this is such a sad poem.
    you can feel the pain of crying each day just trying to be strong even though your not(when you actually are<3).
    You penned the emotion perfectly love.

    amazing job
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Awww thank you thank you thank you,,,i looove you :)