Wow vivid and scary I have goosebumps
I loved or great job and fantastic it was like I was there living that moment :) 5/5

A story for around the campfire.
Written very well, it held my interest and images popped clearly in my head. Well done Captain :-)

Connie

I think I'll have to jump back under the covers and hide after reading this. Gave me the shivers. Lovely job!

Dang excellent piece of work
I like the dark side of poems haha

D: -Shivers- I'm really feelin' this!! It's intense and creepy! It gave me chills. You're a remarkable story-teller, dude! Like a movie scrolling through my head, clear (DARK) images!! Yes, I definitely want to see more of this! Nice work, Captain :)

5/5