Veeeerrrrryyyyy saaaaad :(

I just felt sad when I read it, I mean I love it.
It has alot of deep meanings in it sweetie, and you expressed it wonderfully.

Awww this poem was so deep and raw... I loved every word. I loved the idea of being afraid to sleep, and the way you painted this picture was brilliant. I lovedddd this stanza:

"It's rolling around my bed like
a homeless shadow that finds
comfort in my heart. For fear
has always found a habitat
inside me."

Amazing!!! and the ending was perfect - no one could have written it better! Well done hon!

Btw in stanza 2 - did you mean "choking" .. I just wanted to check :)