The description in this is amazing. It's just so strong it hits you hard. Truly great work. Your very good at writing.

Wow I can't find a favorite stanza because the entire poem was amazing and super fantastic :) I really loved it and delighted to read it a very greatly well writtin peice awesome and greatly worded :) magnificent :) 10/10

This doesn't make much sense.

This is really interesting.
The rhymes.. the darkness, and oh, the suspense!

This is something completely original and captivating. Great work.

This is something completely original and captivating. Great work.

And so the angels fall one by one their shapes twist into a crawl. deformed the puritans a halo now a opium trance. The sulpur sting pleasantly pleasing my rotting carcas decadenlty teasing. Gabriel my love stop stop the reading , my raptured heart is bleeding.

VERY GOOD