Excellent work! Great take on our modern society. Really makes you think. Could be longer. I would suggest taking a second wack at it. I'm sure theres more to write down.

Excellent work! Great take on our modern society. Really makes you think. Could be longer. I would suggest taking a second wack at it. I'm sure theres more to write down.

Nice poem....something different from the ones we usually see on this site....are you en engineering student or something....??

This is good I enjoyed reading it but you might want to double check for spelling errors an such,,,you might have some but idk,,,a good poem,,keep up the good work :)