Comments : My personal leaf gold

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Wow this is powerfull, the way you speak about death is very sad yet creative, I like how you say you don't have time to place death in your calendar and overall I think you penned a great piece so 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Oh and nominated :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yes, this is very poweful indeed, sad and creative,
    Jenni, everytime I read something of yours, I feel myself entering a new world, your words are vivid with imagery and the flow is flawless,
    What a sad piece,
    that ending was magnificent.

    kisses, hugs
    Love
    Tara
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    AMAZING the poem is touching and lovely:) freat work a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Damn, very powerful and vivid. I am speechless. Its hypnotizing, once you start to read it is impossible to stop for one does not want to break free from this point of losing control.

    Have to say, a poet must start with the first line and keep alluring the readers until are they tangled within the poem and leave pondering and reflecting. And you have accomplished the task. It was a delight reading this piece. Flawless is the word.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    "My cold leather couch
    placed in the middle of this
    colorless room.
    Unseeing eyes focus
    on that nonexistent point.

    The air is dank from tears
    I wanted to cry and galling
    because of my hollow self.
    Why do these minutes last
    several hours?"

    ^ I loved how you set the scene out for the reader. This opening really invites the reader in and draws there focus to the rest of the poem.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    This is such a beautiful poem, i love how vivid it is and how you make the reader feel the emotion and vision the scene. well done 5/5 ^.^

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A wonderful wonderful poem I must say...
    beautifully penned the emotions of death...:))

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This poem has strength and intensity. Awesome wording, great flow and excellent clarity. Good job girl

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    The title draws me straight in ive been adoring your poetry the last 5 to 8 poems have been flawless you are becoming a serious lil poetess. .. This poem as amazing the wording and flow were perfect. ... One of the best on this site in my eyes wonderful x

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    The title draws me straight in ive been adoring your poetry the last 5 to 8 poems have been flawless you are becoming a serious lil poetess. .. This poem as amazing the wording and flow were perfect. ... One of the best on this site in my eyes wonderful x

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow... the power of the written word has just been outdone by...JENNI. :D Haha. Anyway, that was beyond touching and you gave me a different outlook on how death can feel. The intensity and raw feelings, of which you have penned were so...brilliant..

    5/5

    -Heather