Sad but beautiful, lovely, sweet and dreamy,,,you penned thee emotions well and you can see as things come to be as you read each word,,it may not have been perfect but wonderful and amazing in my eyes I love love loved this magnificent poem :) 5/5

Wow!! really awesome....ya kinda sad but damn well expressed.... a definite 5/5

That is sad but very beautiful i feel every emotion very nice job<3 (rtf)