The title is really eye-catching and your words pulled me in even more. You might think about putting your note to the end up this poem and making the reader guess out of what point of view this is written. That might keep the tension up and the "surprise" might even make this poem more memorable.
I think that the feelings are powerful and actually convincing. It doesn't seem overdone or not realistic. Overall I really enjoyed reading this poem.

This is amazing. You have done an excellent job. I think that the story id

This is amazing. You have done an excellent job. I think that the story is fantastic. Your use of emotion is marvelous. This is a 5/5 from me

It kept me entertain... Haha and I am go with a Teddy bear. Pretty cool.

My bad , I know this poem is sad because she feels alone but i couldn't help to laugh because of your last sentence,... about who's view it is.