Good imagery but too short to tell the story clearly.

^I disagree.

The imagery was serenely penned, and I thought the length was just right.
It ended well with questions lingering, and gave me something to think about.

I enjoyed this very much

love,
Tara
xxxxx

An interesting right, I liked the ending. Loneliness can be extremely difficult for almost everyone. 5/5

mandy :)

This poem is great.. i can feel each word. :) 5/5

"Loneliness is a nightly visitor
He hungers for a companion
or for the end to come."
^
This is simple yet lovely..

The length is fine with me. It is a dark poem. They're usually meant to be obscure and mysterious, and this is just it. The ending is quite happy and I love that about this piece. Dark poetry most of the time, end sadly or tragically, but this showed how their loneliness ceased - by finding each other.

Truly enjoyed this piece. Keep writing,