Comments : Simple Words [Acrostic]

  • 14 years ago

    by Meme

    Really good one Hassan
    I like this style of poetry alot, it has some kind mysteriousness.

    Well done

  • 14 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    OMG this is amazing:) I truely love it:) for sure 555555

  • 14 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    OMG this is amazing:) I truely love it:) for sure 555555

  • 14 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    AMAZING
    AWESOME
    amazing friendship
    i looved it a fantastic peice and i was very delighted to read it great job :) :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A nice acrostic for sure,
    however maybe you coiuld help the flow by adding some punctuation, just a tip for you, makes it easier to read.
    However, I like the imagery, sweet and serene with some sadness too amidst the friendship,

    Lovely,
    love
    Tara-Kay