Comments : Trusted Betrayal

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow such depth and sadness,,,breaking trust,stealing all the joys,,,very good poem,,i loved it though sad,,,i feel i can relate but can't see how,,,awesome job,,,amazing once again,,,you captured all you wanted to show :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Sorry,,,by the way my favorite stanza,,,

    For when a man can't be trusted
    with your treasures of the heart
    then he can't be trusted at all
    and that is the saddest part!