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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    WOW,,, i love love LOVED it!!!! :D
    AMAZING once again but another favorite of mine,that doesn't say muchs when i love all your works but wow magnificient,splendid,wonderful, awesome, excellent and all the words in the world,,,
    I too relate to most of this,,,lovely
    amazing job i LOVED it :D 10/10

    My favorite stanzs:

    I am ready for true love
    For the joys it will bring
    And then I know that my heart
    Will never cease to sing.

    I know it makes me stronger
    As I make it to the other side
    But while still in the middle
    The pain does still reside.

    It does excite me to think
    That is just around the corner
    And I will be a new creature
    Never again the mourner!

    It has been way too long
    Too long that I have wandered
    Not knowing where I stood
    And having much to ponder.

    I loved the entire poem everything was GREAT! :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This was a really good poem. I loved your flow and choice of words.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Beautifully written and quite inspiring. :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Wonderfully written there are so many lines within this poem that I found great I couldn't just pick one. I hope you can kick your addiction and find true love.