AMAZING :) :) 5/5

A wonderful poem...good message from the poem...I think you have a lot to say coz your poems are usually long...try and keep it a bit short and for that,try and use great wordings to keep the interest...just a suggestion...:]

It was amazing, reavealing argumentative truthful, yet so sad that it seems like this will never end. I loved ur poem it should be opened to the world for heavy conciousness, socity saddens me a bit :/