I've never read a poem such as this one. A very creative, but more so an intelligent piece. You have a winning poem here, your talent is plain to see.
Great flow, rhyme and wording. Excellent.

I really like this one.. i think it had alot of emotion and it was just amazing. I am glad i took the time to read it for you!! But this is great i give it
5/5

And you have talent too,

The flow was flawless,
and the rhymes themselves were enough to set me on edge,
you did a lovely job here,
this was original, and really made sense,
I liked the way you evaluated your poetic knowledge, and why you write, what poetry means to you, it was all here and you did it wll indeed

love,
Tara
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I absolutely agree to the comments above.

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's not only the originality and uniqueness that pulled me in, but also your choice of words. Your rhymes don't feel forced at all and I rarely find a poem that flows as smoothly as this one does (actually checked the amounts of syllables in every stanza after my first read and they're really similar). What I liked most of all is the message you convey.

There is nothing to fault, well penned.

You are offically one of my favorite writers. :)
5/5

Wow thanks!, It really had never occured to me that I should try poetry, and to hear so many great people say I have talent, is just the icing on the cake.

I hope this isn't beginners luck... :)

And as far as this site go's... its really great to see some feedback on things like this.

I'll keep writing, maybe something a little deeper.

YOU ARE AMAZING
Very wonderful and great and wowing once again I love love loved it,,,in my opinion you sound alot like or remind me of my favorite author Robert Frost :) 5/5 ur on my favs list too :D

The poem is fab...!I wonder why you doubt your potentials...
the only thing was the poem appeared like paragraphs but it possessed the flow of poetry when it is read...!
nice attempt..!

Breathtaking.
Intrieging.
:) 5/5